Tuesday, 18 November 2014

not entirely to sure if i should give my penis train windows or to leave at its core basics


  1. If it's a train then windows would indeed be useful but it's not a must. I think testing out smaller windows along it rather than one big window might look better?

  2. maybe 'portholes' not windows? A bit more organic and in keeping with the 'train'? The only other observation I'd make is to do with the saturation of some of the colours in the background elements etc. - a bit too pastel for that kitschy Koons effect? Also - can't help thinking that the sofa itself needs a little something else perhaps - it's a bit shape, but is it Koons-y enough, or contributing enough to your world? Just a thought...